We're scared. What are we going to do without Piggy's glasses? We're scared because now it's just us and Ralph and Piggy. All the other boys went with Jack and even though Jack's kind of scary all painted up they seem to be having more fun over there. We like Ralph but sometimes he's as bad as our teachers back at school. He has all of these rules and he even wants us to take a bath before we go over to Castle Rock. He's crazy. What difference does it make? Besides we jump into the lagoon anyway.
We're scared. What are we going to do? We didn't want to go to Castle Rock but it would be too scary to stay here by ourselves. Since we were going why couldn't we paint ourselves up just like Jack? That would have been fun. That's the trouble with Ralph. He's no fun. He's always talking about the signal fire and he always wants us to find wood and work. We knew we shouldn't have gone to see Jack because when we got there bad things happened. Jack and Ralph are always fighting about who is the leader. Why can't they both be leaders? Ralph could be like our mom and Jack could be our dad and Piggy is like our babysitter. Why can't we have Ralph's rules and Jack's fun and hunting? Nobody's listening to Ralph anymore but they should because he wants to protect us.
We're scared. What are we going to do? Piggy is dead. Roger killed him and then they tried to kill Ralph. Next it will be us. What are we going to do? We hear the other kids screaming and laughing like hyenas. They have pig blood painted all over them and they dance around us as we lay in the middle of the circle just like Si... don't want to think about that. We're scared. What are we going to do? Who is going to save us?
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3 comments:
i like how u show the boys are scared "We're scared. What are we going to do without Piggy's glasses? " a thing i think u can add is mention the attack at there camp when jack snuck in and stole the glasses.
Kira-
Your blog was filled with emotions from Samneric. I really liked "Si... don't want to think about that. We're scared. What are we going to do? Who is going to save us?"
It showed how frightened they were.
Something that I didn't get was... "Besides we jump into the lagoon anyway." That doesn't make sense to me. You might want to clarify that.
Also you make it seem like they would rather go to Jack's tribe. In the book, they don't want to go in his tribe at all.
Great job!
-sky
your blog was good and i agree with both DJ and Sky as i was reading your blog i noticed that u wrote what are we going to do many times so that was good i liked it and also i need clarification on what you ment by jumping in the lake but other wise fabuloso(fabulous)
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